Thursday, January 29, 2009

Do Not Go Gentle into that good night

The meaning of this message is that he compares night to death and life to light. He compares night to death because you no longer living and you cannot see light and that's the end. He also compares life to light because you are awake and you could see light. I compare this to my poem because it uses repetition but it extended it by taking each stanza and explains what does it means. For example, it says ''good men'', and show an explain what ''good men'' means. In my poetry it's like the same thing I would take a important stanza then explain the details. For example, I am hope change the world, then I would explain what do I mean about that stanza.

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Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Why do people say sorry

Why do people say sorry when they know they don't mean it.It hurts so bad because if you say sorry and you don't mean it,it hurts the other person more then before.I say sorry because I know it was my fought and I shouldn't never done what I did. People say sorry because they know that they don't want be involved anymore and they want to stop doing what they did. Don't say sorry to others if you know you don't mean it!

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Monday, January 26, 2009

Let's all BE smart!

Yes he became president smart and proud
He hardly made mistake and made the crowd loud
From beginning to end he has succeeded
Change and hope we would need
From hard work and building up
These President would never erupt
We all thought this day would never come
Lets make EVERYTHING freedom!

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Friday, January 23, 2009

Praise Song for the Day

Stanza 1 analysis: I believe that each day we go about our business walking past each other catching each eye is a very important stanza because it makes us Americans look disconnected.People out there does this because they don't have the time to look and dig into our business. They probably need worry about there because they need to worry about paying rent,take caring there family and e.t.c. People should give peace to one another because people and slaves who took the time to put up bricks and and bridges and e.t.c.


Stanza 2 analysis: ''I know there is something better down the world,we need to find a place where we are safe,we walk into that which we cannot yet see.That stanza means a lot because we have a president ahead that is going to make our country a better place and put all the puzzles all together and make this place one nation and make every one care and love about each other and there nation and hopefully tomorrow everyone would have a smile in there face.

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Thursday, January 22, 2009

BECOMING PRESIDENT

When I become President I am going to do a great job. I am going to help communities help people and family's that are struggling in there life. Also, job opportunities save up coming jobs. Raise taxes for middle class kids. Help people that have health care problems and save pollution e.t.c. Why do I want to become President because I know that I am going to improve and be the first African-American Muslim woman President. Using Barack Obama's words makes me become president because I know that I have confidence and the opportunity to take that chance difficult, important and determined.

Yes I am, yes I can, yes we will-I am going to become president. I am going to graduate. I am going to high school. I am going to college. I am getting a degree. I am going to law school and become a lawyer. I am going to run for office. I am going to become PRESIDENT!


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Tuesday, January 6, 2009

What I feel about this school!

This school is a great school. My mom putting me into this school is a wonderful experience.I have work so hard this three years my language have much better because of this wonderful teacher teacher I admire. This school has change my life and my attitude because I use to be one of those girls who had so much experience through out all my life. A kid would wish they can have the same opportunity as I did in this school I did everything I wanted to learn and do right in this school. All the kids I have been recognizing has change ever since it was 6th grade.I describe my self as a energetic responsible and a mature person.Why do I say this because I know something I do right would lead me something good.When I grow up I want to be a president of the United State of America. This is very big responsibility for me. To lead me there I need to continue school to go to college go to high school of course and get a college degree and become president and also become a lawyer. The reason why I want to become this because I know that I can do something in life put my parent in a extra good condition and I would succeed .God Bless C.I.S 339!

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Monday, January 5, 2009

He was a determine guy through out his life he follow his heart he would help him self and other kids to reach his goals and he had succed his career. He had achieve his goal by doing the right thing and he is always remember the best musician in a art,dramatic school.He deserves it!

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